Bunshin no jutsu

im in the academy trials and they ask me to do a Bunshin. how hard can that be? Iku ze! Bunsin no jutsu!

*poof* (nothing appears) umm, that was just my trick to lure you watch this! Bunshin no jutsu!
*Poof* (a dead clone appears) "well this was harder then i tought" your a bunch of waste *kicks me out*
i could not accept that i couldn´t make a single Clone, i couldn´t be bothered with this anymore i went to sleep. The next day i woke up they said it was the last day to be a full academy student. i put on my clothes and started training in the fields.

Bunshin no jutsu! *poof*( a white clonse standing still)
Bunshin no jutsu! *poof* i couldn´t belive it! i did it, well or so i tought i made a perfect clone of myself but no good about five seconds it disappeared.
Bun...shin.....ju..... o? wheres the smoke or the clone?? Shin comes up towards me and says "Naruto don´t give up i know you can do it" im tired i got no chakra left i can´t. Shin: take this pill it will replenish your chakra and energy by a small amount. Thanks shin!

i go to the academy, then the jounin says "stop wasting our time" but i didn´t care,

Bunshin no jutsu! *poof* i....i.....wooho! i did it!!! yay yay yay! so did i pass?

jounin: Naruto you did pass this test tough from now on as a full academy student you will have to work alot harder.

Naruto: yea i will thanks!

denied the kage bunshin no jutsu is a B rank ninjutsu your word count is way to small the average word count for B rank jutsus is at least 200 words - 300 words 200 being the minimum

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