dark release:dark tournado

rank:B

training:

Zuko was back in his old clan house.He looked around to see if the ashs from his last vistest was still there.He looked by the tree just to see light brown dead grass.Zuko has nothing to do so he dieceds to learn another jutsu of his it was called dark release:dark tournado.Zuko was about to do the handseals for the jutsu but herd noies.He jumped on top of a house and saw leaf anbu come to were he once stood.He saw them look around for him.Zuko looked at them from the roof and then did handseals."dark release:dark tournado"he yelled as a large black tournado appeared front of the anbu.The anbu saw the tournado and tryed to move out of the way but the got sucked into it along with some of the old clan houses.Zuko soon did hand seals to cancel the jutsu and he saw the anbu laying on the ground about to get up.When the anbu got up tried and tried to do jutsu but they cloud not.Their chakra was srained by the jutsu that zuko did.the keep on trying to do jutsu.Zuko watched the anbu as they struggled to do jutsu.He had an evil smile on his face because he likes to see his prey struggle.Zuko then appeared infront of the anbu with an emostionless face and activated his eternl crowyugan.After zuko activated his crowyugan yellow flames appeared on the anbu.The screamed in pain as the were burned to death.zuko soon left the area again.

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